Saturday, October 23, 2010
WEEK 9
Hugs, kisses and alcohol breath. Aunts, Uncles and dim-witted relatives. Dancing, flower throwing and money tree’s. Beautiful baby’s. Men in tuxedos and women in dresses. Excited children and sweaty adults. A mix of music and karaoke that night. Mother-son dance, and father-daughter one too. Lots of photos, smiles and tears.
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Vjac, I see you cowering in the corner, fingers crossed that I won't slam you for this week 9! Well, this is literary pointillism, without a doubt. You can do it! Vignettes will not be your downfall!
ReplyDeleteDon't give me a rewrite, but try another one along the same lines as this to reassure me that you are confident about this sort of writing.
Haha I was hoping I wouldn't get a re-write request,but I figured since it was super short-I would. There is just so many ways to write a vignette, and I wanted to try different ones. I will try a re-write asap, though. :)
ReplyDeleteI think this was the first piece of yours I read yesterday, but your prompt reactions settled my doubts. Forget the rewrite.
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